Tuesday, October 2, 2012

Here we go...

...let the poetry flow through me like a stream of unbound inspiration.

...or at least let me suck a bit less than usually...

17 comments:

  1. Jani, I have some majestic rhymes for you man

    "I loved you, I was your good luck
    And you never gave a flying fuck."

    Good luck bro, be sure to use them xD

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    1. Thanks for the help man, although I don't think that really hits in the context of what I'm supposed to write about :D

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    2. Well, wasn't 13th Desciple song about this? xD Great song, be sure to add it as a bonus track to whatever album are you releasing next ^^

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  2. such a small dose ?! oh, you're getting older :)

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  3. I also need to write a lyrics for this song my band is working on. Think I might try this method and hopefully, come up with something that sounds like lyrics xD

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    1. I recommend it, it worked for me a few weeks ago, and hopefully it'll work tonight as well. Try it on for size :)

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  4. this is enough for inspiration ? looks like rum :p

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    1. It's whiskey, and it's working :)

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    2. one time i will try too, maybe it works for another kind of art too ... btw... look at this, it is stupid, but maybe for laugh https://fbcdn-sphotos-d-a.akamaihd.net/hphotos-ak-snc6/183522_492551210763789_1448687499_n.jpg

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  5. Hi Jani, this is my poem, I hope you're gonna like it :)
    Walking through the valley of memories
    Longing for the scent of that summer breeze
    I remember the dimming light and your pretty face
    The lagoons of your eyes when I held you in embrace
    I wish I could travel back in time
    I wish I could travel back in rhyme
    To feel again the exstacy of your silky touch
    To drown into these eyes that I worshipped much
    You were my rose in bloom, my beautiful maiden
    While I, a wretched, with remorse, was laden
    With your love filling my soul, I would conquer a new land
    But all I can see now is your name fading on the sand
    Your scarlet tears were always my soothing rain
    Everyday, I need your arden caress to ease my pain
    Our once upon a time entwined hearts are now asunder
    Thus, all I can hear now is the roar of thunder
    While my universe was pitch black and my soul ,dreary
    You were my guiding light, my guardian fairy
    I promise you I will never forget our eternal romance
    And your fervouring kiss, my dawn of solace

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    1. Honestly Jani, what do you think of it?

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    2. Not half bad dude/dudette :) Show pretty good command of the language, using paragraphs or verses would've made it a bit easier on the eyes though:)

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    3. Thank you very much Jani and thanks also for the advice. By the way, I'm a dude :)

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    4. Mine rhymes are better xD Or at least more "liimatained" xD

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  6. Is that glass you're holding made by Iittala? :) Never would have guessed that a rocker could appreciate great finnish design :) Way to go!

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