I also need to write a lyrics for this song my band is working on. Think I might try this method and hopefully, come up with something that sounds like lyrics xD
one time i will try too, maybe it works for another kind of art too ... btw... look at this, it is stupid, but maybe for laugh https://fbcdn-sphotos-d-a.akamaihd.net/hphotos-ak-snc6/183522_492551210763789_1448687499_n.jpg
Hi Jani, this is my poem, I hope you're gonna like it :) Walking through the valley of memories Longing for the scent of that summer breeze I remember the dimming light and your pretty face The lagoons of your eyes when I held you in embrace I wish I could travel back in time I wish I could travel back in rhyme To feel again the exstacy of your silky touch To drown into these eyes that I worshipped much You were my rose in bloom, my beautiful maiden While I, a wretched, with remorse, was laden With your love filling my soul, I would conquer a new land But all I can see now is your name fading on the sand Your scarlet tears were always my soothing rain Everyday, I need your arden caress to ease my pain Our once upon a time entwined hearts are now asunder Thus, all I can hear now is the roar of thunder While my universe was pitch black and my soul ,dreary You were my guiding light, my guardian fairy I promise you I will never forget our eternal romance And your fervouring kiss, my dawn of solace
AMEN!!
ReplyDeleteThe Elixir of Inspiration!
Jani, I have some majestic rhymes for you man
ReplyDelete"I loved you, I was your good luck
And you never gave a flying fuck."
Good luck bro, be sure to use them xD
Thanks for the help man, although I don't think that really hits in the context of what I'm supposed to write about :D
DeleteWell, wasn't 13th Desciple song about this? xD Great song, be sure to add it as a bonus track to whatever album are you releasing next ^^
Deletesuch a small dose ?! oh, you're getting older :)
ReplyDeleteThere's always a chance for a refill...
DeleteI also need to write a lyrics for this song my band is working on. Think I might try this method and hopefully, come up with something that sounds like lyrics xD
ReplyDeleteI recommend it, it worked for me a few weeks ago, and hopefully it'll work tonight as well. Try it on for size :)
Deletethis is enough for inspiration ? looks like rum :p
ReplyDeleteIt's whiskey, and it's working :)
Deleteone time i will try too, maybe it works for another kind of art too ... btw... look at this, it is stupid, but maybe for laugh https://fbcdn-sphotos-d-a.akamaihd.net/hphotos-ak-snc6/183522_492551210763789_1448687499_n.jpg
DeleteHi Jani, this is my poem, I hope you're gonna like it :)
ReplyDeleteWalking through the valley of memories
Longing for the scent of that summer breeze
I remember the dimming light and your pretty face
The lagoons of your eyes when I held you in embrace
I wish I could travel back in time
I wish I could travel back in rhyme
To feel again the exstacy of your silky touch
To drown into these eyes that I worshipped much
You were my rose in bloom, my beautiful maiden
While I, a wretched, with remorse, was laden
With your love filling my soul, I would conquer a new land
But all I can see now is your name fading on the sand
Your scarlet tears were always my soothing rain
Everyday, I need your arden caress to ease my pain
Our once upon a time entwined hearts are now asunder
Thus, all I can hear now is the roar of thunder
While my universe was pitch black and my soul ,dreary
You were my guiding light, my guardian fairy
I promise you I will never forget our eternal romance
And your fervouring kiss, my dawn of solace
Honestly Jani, what do you think of it?
DeleteNot half bad dude/dudette :) Show pretty good command of the language, using paragraphs or verses would've made it a bit easier on the eyes though:)
DeleteThank you very much Jani and thanks also for the advice. By the way, I'm a dude :)
DeleteMine rhymes are better xD Or at least more "liimatained" xD
DeleteIs that glass you're holding made by Iittala? :) Never would have guessed that a rocker could appreciate great finnish design :) Way to go!
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